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Ah if you consider what I said disrespectful,as a fellow writer I recommend you should grow thicker skin. I'll try to keep my words more proper English.
ah I wish Chinese authors would do anything besides copy scenes word for word from the movies. can't wait for Charles to intervene
girls only slow down his pokeball throwing speed
the Hokage has no mercy, Obita just got sacrificed so they could build up the tension haha. weakest friend vs strongest friend.
paradox mons are highly aggressive and brutish. Entei is noble and cool
his previous titles that were used to make this one still give their bonuses so the fusion title doesn't nessacarily have to give buffs to the same exact things as previous titles. if it was a 20% comp buff then his total comp buff would be 50% now
no, a golden skill point allows you to break limits yes thus is correct however it can also be used to level a skill normally. if wood talent was at A+ the it would go to S
Apologies English isn't my first language and I am used to speaking in short hand. Let me try again with proper English. You have previously mentioned that an overpowered MC is boring, and here you have the MC being defeated quite easily by Mephisto. Yes while being overpowered can be boring, having your main character immediately get defeated after a huge training arc is in rather poor taste. To us readers, it's a slap in the face. You could have written the struggle better or had him face a weaker manifestation of Mephisto. Plenty of other writers hand wave the power scaling of the demon lord by saying "it was only a small part of his power manifesting". I understand with Odin and TAO showing up, you are giving the readers a power scaling live example but it seems so forced. There are plenty of people expressing this sentiment and I hope you take this experience and use it for next time. There would have been much less backlash if the scene was handled better. Thank you for the time.
the mc got folded, yeah op is boring but your response is to let him get shit on? lmao what a joke.
he's got plenty of time, he's not in a rush