Soul_Grenade

Should be less

It’s a story about a misogynist in a misandrist world. BUt there’s hardly any difference in this world and any other generic plain medieval world on this platform. There are a lot of other minor things that bothered me enough to drop it without reading to full but I’ll mention the most glaring. The mc is supposed to be super smart but the author can’t write him smart. So they made others stupid. He will mention the most obvious common sense stuff and then say others were blown away by his intelligence. He’s basically the one eyed king in the land of blind. The world is misandrist but there’s hardly anything mentioned about it. (Except maybe male red light districts. If it even counts as one.) And the repeated (and frankly stupid in this kind of story based novel) trope about mc ”conquering” women to the point of belief reversal with his tool. Anyway I’ve avoided spoilers (I think). This was not for me. Though author’s grammar is fine(which is a prize here), the writing itself can be improved.

Why are they running though ? Can’t they get a car ?

If this thing is so rare that mc’a the only guy to have dark energy resistance body or something. How does everyone know exactly what it is ? Also why is his ”medical” info not private.

Or just better infrastructure. Make another arena if this one’s so crow ded

Looking at rest of the reviews. Pretty sure this is gonna get deleted by the narcissist author as well

Said like a true ten year Old

Why not make a concentrated dome around the wolf ?

12000kg of water ?!!!

Or just use litres like refrigerators