Just a independent writer. Writes as a hobby, but please do read my first novel, "The Darkfallen", it's one of my dream project.
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Hi. Author here. What's the contest about?
Since I'm currently writing the Volume 5. I'm gonna publish one chapter/week when the volume is over maybe I'll consider daily updates.
The chapter slightly revealed the Mc's unusable mental health condition, internal conflicts are heavily romanticized. Some of his attitudes and actions may be considered immoral, sociopathic tendencies having freaked out over nothing or experience a panic-attack for abusing women, doing drugs, often to the point of over-indulgence. Been "whiny" and "angst," but nonetheless a deeply-flawed individual if not downright reprehensible and sociopathic egotistical, as a reminder that him, no matter how much we are supposed to identify with him, is not a "good guy".
This is the last volume I'm going to publish in this platform! For lacking any comments, votes or any support. Apparently the book going un-appreciated, then why would I waste my valuable time writing about it? However, there's few chapters left. If I notice some improvement, then I will continue. For you readers: Have some idea about the story? Comment it and let me know. I tagged this book, come and support me with a thumbs up! And cheer me up! VOTE for me!
The chapter require some editing comments below to help me correct the errors.
The Valkyrie Division is an obvious example of Amazon Brigade Group of warrior women. A group of crack soldiers who are female. Comments let me know what you think of this squad of highly trained team of women (and no men).
For those who see it through to the plot twist. Comment now! I believe many of whom knew all among.
If you mean his weird creepy powers then for now...
Well I am not a political scientist, if you notice some errors in the world building, comment down below
Mild spoilers- almost half of them wouldn't make to next volume; New or the old ones.