LittlePanda

Thank you for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

is it dropped?From what I see last update was 12d ago.......................................................................................

While the plot of story is way too familiar, It's like a more family oriented version than usual wuxia. To be honest,story is good but you know what is wrong with pace. I reached 200 chpaters and it has only been around 2-3days, max 4-5 since MC came back. He needs to go back to village to heal the child too ,every 2 months. The way it's looking to me is,It might go upto 3k chapters just for first visit. With a good amount of chapters 15/week but 15 chapters doesn't even do 1 day in story. It's a little rushed in slow paced? (That's a first for me) I mean ,In less than 3 days, het met his wife,changed her, earn 3m , spent a whole day shopping and even got his children kidnapped. That's too much for a day. Now what is only my personal view, You focus too much on emotions of each characters, while it isn't bad, is it needed? You can just once tell about their emotions and be done with it but why make them cry almost in every chapter. A little realism wouldn't be bad. The 2nd heroine( Nei )why does she cry for everything,she is supposed to be a strong woman. Stop breakin her. It's too clichè, why every strong woman turns into a woman with insecurity. While there are some more points,they are not that much needed. PS: Just tk be sure,you aren't planning to end story with a month of story or so right?(In story time) if it's that then what I said about pacing is not needed.