DraconicEmperor

"she will meet" to "she met"

gourd would probably be a more context-appropriate container

There's too many "year"s

"He lay on the bed..." => "He laid on the bed..."

"What he should do about her?" => "What should he do about her?"

Most of them get Dragon spirit when they ascend in the draconic realm tho. Except for the qilin iirc.

I don't get why you'd call it "Flexibility" then. Just call it "Gymnastics" if you want the skill to give the MC both flexibility and balance.

I don't think you know what "to that extent". You should use "consequently" instead.

Couple means a single set of 2 people, "couples" imply 2 or more sets of 2 people so at least 4 people. Couple is the correct word to use. "The media loves talking about how the Vice President and Marilyn Monroe are the best couples of this era." Should instead be "The media loves talking about how the VP and Marilyn Monroe are this era's best couple."

Maybe just remove the "FOR" in the "FOR HOW LONG WILL YOU RUN, BOY?" if you're still editing this story.