The_Paragon_White

From what you're demonstrating, it's quite possible that this is the case, but I haven't read any further, so I can't say for sure.

Want me to explain? Well, okay then, the plot is half-assed, the author tried to give depth to the characters, but failed miserably, it's too superficial to catch anyone's attention — the protagonist also leaves much to be desired in many of his decisions, it's as if you're watching a robot and not someone with emotions, despite the author's efforts to try to give him that. The dialogues are so-so and the world-building, precisely because he put Breathing and a half-assed system status, leaves much to be desired. Want more reasons?

Dude, I just found this point of the story kind of stupid, the protagonist taught someone just because the person asked and nothing more, he gave the justification that it was to change her destiny, but he didn't even know her personally! I gave my opinion, if you don't like her, fuck you! Read and do what you want, but don't bother the guy trying to argue about it.

I'm not making a fuss, I just mentioned one of the points that made me not like this story.

For now it's just her

He tells Emma about the system to help...

Let's just say this story is a total waste of time, the main character literally remains "obese" and can't change even if he trains for the rest of his life because of the system, and women are forced to fall in love with him, like, it's disgusting. It looks a lot like those hentais with loser protagonists who are fat, hairy and disgusting... Anyway, I don't recommend it...

Yes, she ran away to join his team. But kind of meh, it was done in a very nonsensical way.

Well, it started off really well, but it kind of lost its charm when he started teaching “Kuina” the Breathing that was the secret to his strength, basically he gave her his power just because he could, without any reason. It's like you're handing out a weapon to someone who could use it against you at any time, that attitude was pure idiocy...

Well, the author has a decent writing style, the only problem is that this applies to the characters that are not the protagonist, who until the moment I read it, is weak and quite pathetic, he has no kind of growth to tell the truth. It kind of makes us not have a good immersion, but make your own judgment when reading — for me it is a huge waste of time.