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Stolen fanfic. Just a simple google search shows that the original fanfic is from fanfiction.net with more chapters available there. I've seen this fanfic twice already in the past few months on this site with a different name each time, it's nuts. It's called Meddling Giant by cloud9stories with non-split chapters up to 30 and is currently ahead compared to on here. It also hasn't been updated in like a year probably because people like you keep stealing it. Why do so many people steal others work and change the name of the fanfic with no mention anywhere in the synopsis?

Decent at the start but personally I didn't like the direction the story took (Chapter 10). Considering it's the chapter with the most comments it's pretty telling how bad most people took it. For those wondering, MC is no longer Harry but something else which I won't spoil. I wouldn't have minded the change if it was done well without losing the MC, but it wasn't and it felt unnecessary to the story considering the knowledge that he already had. It would of probably have been better to have just made an SI or something instead of the change that was made. Kudos to the author though as I think this is like one of the first SG/HP fanfics on here.

Stolen story with nothing in the description mentioning original author, you even changed the original name of the fic. It's real name is called "Of Wands and Kunai" by Womgi on fanfiction.net and has 154k words and has been abandoned by the original author.

This is stolen work. The real story is called "Meddling Giant" by cloud9stories on fanfiction.net. There is nothing in the description mentioning it. Seriously, what's with the amount of stolen storys lately? Atleast ask the author for permission before uploading. Hell even this copy has been copied badly in comparison with the original one. There's 30 chapters on fanfic.net with over 170k words compared to the crap on this site with split chapters.

Truly a great Harry Potter fanfic that outshines a lot of fanfics on this site or fanfiction.net. Fantastic effort by the author to expand on the Harry Potter world and keep to the original lore while also adding new concepts. I've read all 23 chapters in a day and have been really entertained. Pros: -The system is very well detailed and is well implemented into the story. It's not just a randomly given "goldfinger/system" where the user automatically knows what to do. The system is built from scratch by the MC and expanded on while the story progresses. -Grammar is excellent. I don't think I've noticed or spotted any mistakes which is something that I really appreciate, as it's one of the first things I notice in any fanfic/novel. -I personally think that the world background is way more in depth than the original books due to the explanation on different magical cultures, creatures and locations that aren't really explained much in the original books. -Great character development from every character who keep their original personalities and mature and grow as the story progresses. -Fast updates considering the author has pumped out over 200k words in like a month with each chapter being pretty beefy. -Pacing is nice. It was slightly slow at the beginning where everything was being set up and explained but after that the story really speeds up. It's nice not having to always read a repeat of the beginning years at Hogwarts and instead have a good explanation/summary of some parts instead of needlessly padding the word count. Cons: -I'm personally ok with this as it was really well explained by the author as the story went on, but I think a lot of people that read this fic might get put off with the initial sharing of his system and just drop the fic, which is frankly such a waste for them as they are really missing out on an entertaining story. The sharing isn't even a full sharing, it's like a tiny part, which the MC can take back whenever and is monitored so like really while useful to people, it's still basic compared to the MC's system. -Only slight con for me is at times the MC seems to just pull out something OP out of nowhere. While implied that the MC is a genius/prodigy it would still be cool if there was more mention on the magic that the MC has created before instead of him being able to pull that out with not much foreshadowing. All in all this is probably my favourite HP fanfic in the last couple of years. I really find it surprising that there aren't many chapter comments or reviews for it considering it's quality. Kudos to the author for a great story.

Definitely a unique story as I have never read a story where the MC can have multiple systems. Here is my review at chapter 43. Pros: -While it definitely has the cliches we are all use to reading in other novels, it's done well and is pretty entertaining. -If you are a system fan then this is a great novel as the MC has access to potentially an infinite amount of systems. -MC is definitely not instantly OP despite his systems. -Character interactions are pretty good and not flat. All characters seem to have their own personality. Cons: -Writing is understandable but it can be jarring to read sometimes as there are quite a few mistakes or sometimes missing words (beginning chapters) though that does improve the further you read. -This is more of a personal con for me as others may like it but I dislike systems restricting the MCs power/cultivation until the MC does a "special quest". The whole point of a system in my opinion is to progress fast as hell so this makes me sad. -Another personal con that others may like as it's a pretty common cliche in novels is that there always has to be a problem with the MC's aptitude (low) to cultivate. We all know that eventually that will probably change in the future but why can they never have average aptitude or something? :( As the story is still in the early stages, it's understandable that there isn't much world background though the author was starting to provide some info around where I stopped reading.

"unmarked ninjutsu" should be "seal-less ninjutsu" or "ninjutsu without handseals".

"dirty troubles" should be "dirty work".

"for the future work" should be "for future work".

"her" should be "his"