cryzsalix

Going to marvel zombies is both an incredibly stupid idea and a brilliant one. On one hand, there are super juicy rewards, on the other, it's probably one of the easiest places to die in existence; a scratch is all it takes and there are plenty of zombies that can do a lot more than just scratch you.

I wouldn't say there's anything particularly amazing so far, but you seem to have a knack when it comes to portraying Eda's daily life very nicely, and bringing the supporting characters to life. Pretty solid overall. We'll see if I have a heart attack or stroke when it comes to love interests for Eda, but that's a long way off. Seriously, there aren't that many men in Harry Potter to choose from and all of them are pretty mediocre as love interests.

P.S.: It would be a disgrace if this story wasn't a harem. But I would still read it.

Good job giving him useful and versatile abilities without giving him anything that makes him instantly Op. I'm liking the story so far, keep up the good work.

Make the Kiba clan look ridiculous by making a Hyuga better with a ninja dog than them?

Great scene, the complex emotional nuances surrounding this situation and the characters were portrayed touchingly. An interesting point to note is the use of genjutsu here, I wonder if it was used as part of psychological treatments for people with certain disorders or as an emotional crutch that many ninjas secretly rely on to stay sane under all the stress.

I couldn't be happier, for the same reasons you explained right after.

Wow, she really got nerfed hardcore here. Even when she regains lost levels, she'll still have a net negative stat point balance unless something extraordinary happens. The advantage is the class and the bonuses from equipping items I guess.

Wow, I didn't realize it had only been two months. Even so, Naruto has already grown a lot and become much stronger, without the party system, it would be almost impossible for the secondary characters to keep up even a little.

In my experience reading fanfics and novels with systems, the biggest problem authors have is managing secondary characters that remain relevant, due to how powerful the protagonists become at a speed that frankly no one can hope to keep up with. Although difficult, if you can pull this off, you could fix that fatal flaw of other works and make something that is really good.