wintersbrown

Never take a story from one side, always see it from all angles.

that's for real. .. .sometimes the pressure of being back to a corner can create a metamorphoric bloom to your skills

more like the domino effect . .. .

That's one way to put it.. .so naturally practical. .. its amusing yet so down to earth real..

its losing its discriptive edge. I am not suggesting to change the new proof reader but the perspective the novel is being written should return back to Daz, as he has that edgey feel about it, it's his emotions that we are journeying with. .. boooyah

he is not cool,but accepts fate,what can he do.

Thats a good healthy marriage tip ...men nod like you have heard but follow Your mind ..the bulk still falls on you at the end if the day...

Chapters way too short

Roland can we come do this in Nigeria seriously....