AutumnSolstice13

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Be You, Be Unique, Be Crazy, You're Beautiful!

2018-10-19 加入Global

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AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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It started off great but sometimes the flow of the story is forced. There is even a time that i skjpped 10 chapters cause it didnt make sense and it felt like it steered so much from the main idea or topic of this book. It gets better and it gets worse so i guess read at your own risk.
I Became The Novel’s Villain! (THE NOVEL’S VILLAIN)
奇幻 · raycrimson
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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as a gamer we dont really get angry with that petty name. We'll only think he's a child. We'll make fun of him thats for sure
This account of his was nicknamed "URB4D", which stood for "You Are Bad". That's how Leo had fun playing: he used a provocative nickname, and when other people died to him they got angry, but seeing the nick of whoever killed them the anger increased several times over.
Divine Hack System
奇幻 · NunuXD
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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😒
Leo didn't miss the opportunity and looked Sophia up and down, making her confused until he actually said, "This beauty sleep works better than I thought, haha."
Divine Hack System
奇幻 · NunuXD
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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🤦‍♀🤦‍♀🤦‍♀
To their surprise, a senior who had graduated last year, his apartment which turned out to be the apartment assigned to Leo, was the apartment across from Sophia's own apartment!
Divine Hack System
奇幻 · NunuXD
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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oh no hiding their talent? where have i read that before 🤔🤦‍♀😏
'Shit, I'm not good at trying to hide my own strength. My lack of understanding of the world makes me think that many things I'm used to are common to other people, while for them it's something very out of their reality,' Leo thought, frustrated, 'Actually, I will observe MU for what the common life of students is like and try to understand the mentality of the MU professors and deans. If I see that there are no problems, I can start to show more of my own talents and stop hiding them, since because I'm so bad at hiding things right now, it might cause some problems for me in the future.'
Divine Hack System
奇幻 · NunuXD
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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Ohh another "beautiful" girl. 😏
Ch 34 34 - Sophia Parker
Divine Hack System
奇幻 · NunuXD
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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ice turned to dust? 😂 uhmmm noooo..
When the blond boy heard Leo mocking his father, he got angry. Without thinking twice, the boy opened his hand and conjured a stone of ice to attack Leo. As soon as Leo saw this, he was on alert. With a quick thought, he picked up the metal spoon that was beside him and went to throw the spoon into the ice cube. Using the Aim-Bot, Leo aimed at the underside of the ice shard at an angle that would change the flight path to hit the ceiling of the school cafeteria. But before Leo could finish his movement, a bolt of lightning struck the ice cube and turned it to dust.
Divine Hack System
奇幻 · NunuXD
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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True. it started good but now its just cliche and forced.
Ch 11 11 - Helping a Friend
Divine Hack System
奇幻 · NunuXD
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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the story is a bit forced for me. some things just doesn't make sense and a bit cliche. Kudos to the Author though.Keep it up!
Ch 10 10 - Elizabeth Jones
Divine Hack System
奇幻 · NunuXD
AutumnSolstice133 years ago
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The story and drawing are amazing. However, a really big turn off for me would be his sister. I really find her annoying to the point that i almost drop this cause of her.
Spare Me, Great Lord!
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