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I decided to write a review after reading 100 chapters. I feel like I'm reading a manga with only Buggy as the protagonist. It didn't even feel like I was reading a novel where the protagonist dies and goes to another world. Whether it's the actions of the protagonist or the internal plot, including all the characters in this novel. Everything the author does is the same, they are not alive at all, they are just manga characters. Initially, I thought Buggy's character would gradually grow. with the various experiences Buggy encountered along the way It gradually changes his mind that this world is not the world in the manga he used to read or in the anime he used to watch. But this is the real world with pirates. The naval force and the cruel world government own this planet. I've read up to 100 chapters. I don't see Buggy growing at all. <I don't know if it will grow later because I decided to write a review and stop reading> Having said that, in this part, the Chinese novelist can do better than the author of this story. The author of this novel even thought it was a fictional world, making Buggy's growth unclear. But if he were a Chinese novelist, he would have made Buggy understand for a long time that this world really exists and not the world in the manga. Writing Quality - 2 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 3 World Background - 3 total - 3 P.S. I use google translate to write a review. I hope you read and understand what I want to convey.

I've read the novel so far, what I want to say the most is that it feels like I'm reading a One Piece manga with Buggy as the protagonist. Everything the author writes like this world is just a manga, not the real world. Everything looks so easy, looks so gentle, let's go, everything. In this section, it's honestly the Chinese authors who do a lot better. It makes readers like me realize that the protagonist who crosses the world is a real world and not just a persona in the manga or anime.

In fact, you can also find a crew from the yet-to-be-established Baroqueworks team. These people have high potential to develop much more. It's really a pity that living with a crocodile is just trash.

Isn't in-game and out-of-game character naming separate? You're reborn. You have more in-game data than the closed beta players. You can go faster than others and combine more resources than anyone else. But don't you want to hide your character information? Why are you using the same real name as your in-game name? Don't you think the rich can find your location outside of the game? P.S. Sorry, I use google translate.