sensless

no offence but this is kinda dragging

This very obviously a joke by the author guys

Really? Flyn Rider from tangled. nice.

Great story and all but chapters like this are quite tedious to read so kinda skimmed it soz xxx

Okay so great pace, great everything................almost everything. My only problem with the book is that the author explains stuff like we have a 90 IQ. He gives explanantions that are 10 paragraphs long that could probably fit in 1 or 2. Its great that you wanna make sure we understand, but it gets tedious.

Look its a good book but theres soooooooooo much cringe. Always trying to force emotion fortiniest things. for some reason the mc always has a speech prepared to help someone. I get it, you think youre mature and have good advice to give through your book but you need to tone it down a bit.

Arent those Draco malfoys goons?

Feel like im just reading why you dislike the actual show. im not gona remember any of this lol

The grammar in this is horrendous. Tried my best to push through due to the interesting plot. Sorry had to give up...............................................................

One of the best harry potter fics. However, Cringe romance, its just too cliche. Aurora at the moment seems like to random of a character to get with atm. haven't had a new chapter for over a week