Eldritch

Poetic. I appreciate the level of thought brought into your exposition.

Awesome chapter, GnomeBob & thanks for the satisfying ending to that fight

Fear the Olde Blood

That is an awesome plot device you've made here, author... thanks!

If it couldn't before Sean, it definitely can now. Though it is pretty much Pokémon Jesus, so I don't think there's much to worry about .

Isn't the plot of Legends Arceus that she goes back in time?

Yes, they are vertebrate animals

I strongly recommend others give this fic a try. The characterization of the Hunter, the Doll, and all the other characters are highly compelling and match the 'feel' of their original counterparts. The overarching plot is slightly high-paced, but that could be a benefit depending on one's preference, as it doesn't sacrifice the plot or the characters in doing so. Overall, I highly recommend this story to any who want to take the plunge into a story of blood and myth.

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I am going to ignore World background due to this being a Fanfic. There are numerous grammatical errors throughout the fic, and the pacing is far too quick to establish any characterization. This leads to the ficfeeling like it was written by a middle schooler.