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It could be better, but it's not bad ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
glad you changed the version, oh my god, i thought that horrible thing from the first version would continue, but this one is great [img=recommend]
last chapters are giving a wonderful suspense -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------[img=update]
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has potential -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
God..................... this Chapter 22 was quite sad........................... ........................................................... ..........