Demolok

you need to keep your timeline straight in the last chapter you wrote weeks of using the branch but in this one you write 1 week

none of the 2 options

work on grammar pls

+1

the story so far is good you just need to get the pronouns correct

+1

F/F + 1

not cool

if you're gonna write an English story the n do that don't mix 2 languages it's a headache to read ..,......................................