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they're such a cute couple

I'm waiting author. Do take your time tho. No rush or pressure. ❤

thanks for telling me.

Writing quality for me is on peak. idk how tagalog writing goes tbh, but I like how the words flows so easily. tho i feel like there could be some improvement more if the author wrote things in a normal taglish way, so it wouldn't seem confusing. like for the age for example. character design, i cant really tell much since there is only about 3 chapters and its too short per chapter, so ill wait for more chapters and give my other reviews for other qualities. updating stability...needs a lot of work to do. world background, i feel like it lacks a a bit description on the setting. like use the five senses for example. how the blood smell, how it made him feel, how the texture feels, what the mc see. so on and on. weather and etc, clothing and appearance too. about the story development, I kinda want more exposition first before being thrown to the actual inciting incident. but im looking forward on how things will go.

No, I thought people normally call them comfort room, but I guess I lack research. Thanks for informing me tho.

Giving myself shameless review. Because why not? Writing quality is fine. Well, for me, it is. Story development is getting there. Not entirely, but the genre is about fantasy romance, so I'm still working on the romance. It's a slowburn, typical, kind of approach. The story is more concentrated on each individual's growth, but romance is there, don't worry. Character design: very stubborn naive mc with a slight character development. MC is weak and ignorant at first, but she will grow more in later chapters of the story. Or maybe in this middle. Updating stability: I'll try to update once in a week, but recently, I've been uploading loads of chapters. World Background: Not bad. It's full of magical creatures and magical realism. Magic system is a mix of both hard and soft approach. Setting is set in a mix of both modern and medieval style. I mean, the magic technology in the world is a bit similar to modern time. While the rest is similar to medieval. There are culture and all the stuff that makes the story more realistic. Does it have happy ending? Yes, it will have Happy Ending with lots of angst first.

they're invading a new planet. People will need to build colony, kingdom, empire, nation, or country. The game is there to teach people the groundwork. The basics of building a new nation.

same title: The World Online. MC Name: Ouyang Shou or something like that. The setting is also the same as this one. But I think this novel also has some ingredients from the novel: The Reincarnation of the strongest swords god. it's a mixed of everything.

there's a novel like this very similar to the writing of this one. It also has the same title; just different character names. And the mc is more cold and calm-headed in the other novel.

Have I read this before? why does this look so familiar?