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Hocolate

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2018-09-10 加入Indonesia
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  • Hocolate
    Hocolate21 days ago
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    Because I got a stern warning, it was difficult for me to give a rating 1 comment, but okay, the author hasn't dropped it as long as the novel continues to be worthy of being rated even if it's only two or three stars Maybe after 100 chapters I will re-rate, because there is no picture of where this novel is going, maybe abandoned or continued until the long hiatus

  • Hocolate
    Hocolate2 months ago
    回復 Artemisix_01

    I agree with this person, at least he still has some sense, you know these LGBTQ +++ ABCDEFGZ groups have kidnapped children in a moral way in both places and times in westerns. Be it at school or even at home they are shameless and ridiculous the law protects them.

  • Hocolate
    Hocolate2 months ago
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    I haven't read this novel and even jumped straight to the final chapter 85 now, but after seeing several reviews about Bell who said he was a woman or something (Cross-dressing or bender bender), I don't know if that's true or not. I just said no LGBTQ ++ ABCDEFGZ You know western games are ruined because of them, starting from Concord, Star Wars Outlaw, even Assassin's Creed Shadows which is said to smell disgusting too. So whether the author is actually a group of those in disguise, I don't care, especially the LGBTQ+++ ABCDFGZ predators who hunt children on social media and even invite them (kidnapping to brainwash). Wherever we are and whoever it is, if it smells of LGBTQ++ABCDEFGZ, we are obliged to rate one review. It's already disturbing because they are hunting children. Stay safe

  • Hocolate
    Hocolate3 months ago
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    Don't ever try to read this novel, there are many better novels, because the author is such a simp that even he is too narrow to develop his own characters, by killing and killing. Even though in reality, if he tried to point and shoot a gun at the police station. I guarantee the author's head will definitely have a hole in it. I know this is just a novel, but without balance the reality becomes very ugly, that's why I'm slowly leaving the author simp. Lastly and advice, don't ever donate or support with your dollars, or you will also be an idiot. Why ? If you have a mind and use your brain, you will definitely realize what I mean. real examples of the games Concord and Star Wars Outlaw, are the most failed games in AAA gaming history. keep smart and safe!!!

  • Hocolate
    Hocolate3 months ago
    回復 BlackFox_Memorys

    Yes, I agree

  • Hocolate
    Hocolate7 months ago
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    Believe it or not, this novel will be dropped by the author himself. I haven't even read it but I'm not kidding with my assessment. Alpha readers are the first readers after the novel manuscript has finished its final chapter. The alpha reader can be yourself as a writer or someone else.

  • Hocolate
    Hocolate8 months ago
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    Sampah 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

    該書已被刪除。
  • Hocolate
    Hocolate8 months ago
    回復 Supernova_Uchiha

    do you even have a brain?!” giving a 5 star review on a novel that can't even be called a novel?

  • Hocolate
    Hocolate8 months ago
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    I'm even sure that this author can't play a game, be it offline (BaldurGate 3 bannerlord, harvest moon etc.) or online (ESO, BDO etc.). Why ? because he wrote a story script where MC OP (an idiot brain with an IQ of 10) with his stupid system. He doesn't understand what expectations and reality are (with summoning Budha, Scathach, Ruhas, Killua? lol) I'm even sure that in the reality of an author like you, if you play and create a team in Dota 2, maybe in the initial preliminary round of The International you will have 300 dead on your hero hahahahahahahahahhahahaahhahaha

  • Hocolate
    Hocolate8 months ago
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    Will the author continue the story? If this drops, I'd like to pick up this fanfic 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃