Well, I have given the devil his dues and started posting my novel here. Obligatory links: https://discord.gg/6kEgb5Q https://ko-fi.com/darkwood
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I have played both warband and bannerlord so probably in some measure.
Thanks for the support, and there is a new chapter now.
No and I am back.
I wasn't when you asked the question but I am now so here we are.
No, there will not be a harem. There will only be one person that he marries, and there will not be mistresses either. Other nobles might have them but I do not intend to have mistresses for Braydon.
You said that you thought it would be a trash harem novel with lolis but then want me to add meaningless story features that are typical of trash harem novels with lolis. This is a kingdom building novel, not an isekai.
Just to note on that point, Mireille is not from Barakhil. War with the empire might well happen, but not because of this.
I am dealing with some irl stuff right now as well as a helpful dose of writer's block. Mainly the writer's block.
Very insight, much wow. It is almost as good as my shameless review.
Your 1st and 4th points are the same, no map. And having a map takes time and/or money to make. Something that has been partially solved already since it has been a long time since I wrote chapter 13. There is a map in the discord and on the kofi page that I link to at the end of every chapter. Your 2nd point is a fair critique assuming that I intended to make an infallible character not someone who had literally just inherited his land on chapter 1, he will be reliant on those around him. If it is the matter of them being guests that you are critiquing then I can only say we have a difference of opinion on what a flaw is. Your 5th point should not even be a point at all if you have read even the synopsis of the story. No, he is not.