OppaiDraig

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

Would restructure the dialogue to "Go, go. Don't waste our time," or to just use 1 "Go"

I smell something grim

You can also shorten "I am" to "I'm", most people would

the S in "meters" is unnecessary

That comma makes it sound like the leader was talking to Alucard. Would suggest removing it to "that Alucard?"

a nice little detail on that last bit, honestly wasn't expecting that

This paragraph sounds weird to me, could you explain the intention of this paragraph? Might be able to take a clue of what needs to be fixed.

"becoming a 5th class magician"

I sense some genius spell weaving.