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I'm just happy you're not using chatgpt this means you're putting in the effort

Okay a quick review for the story *Writing quality*_[3.7 of 5]-It's the typical web novel writing it's not good but it's not bad either the grammar is the thing that's killing the story once that's solved the quality of the novel will improve dramatically. {Advice for the author- After you finish writing the chapter copy it and paste it on Chatgpt or any language AI to help you smoothen things out}. *Story development*_[4.6 of 5]- I'm waiting for the moment he meets Bruce with the Essence of heal imagine his surprise when he sees the amount of injury Bruce has I'd expect a dramatic shout. Back on topic the hits about Gray eventual adoption was a nice touch i like it so far it looks like you know what you're doing so I'll leave you and cook *Character design*_[5? of 5]- Give him black hair and grey or blue eyes and he will practically look like a Wayne. So far we don't have a clear picture of how the mc looks like. *Updating stability*_[3.9/4 of 5]- it's painful slow from my view it needs faster updates *World background*_[5 of 5]- It's DC comics what more do you want

The aftertaste is the weird thing for me

The irony is not lost on me

Dad energy right there

Check the wiki

Totally depends on how you look at it

How isn't that stolen by now??