Rival789

Heidi is going to be a tyrant when they finally have the need for household staff. However, it will be interesting to see if she trains up a legion of Grayfia-esque maids from DxD.

I knew when reading the first few chapters that the story tickled that part of my brain that I had read this before. The story is stolen from FF.net https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13251826/1/I-m-not-a-hero

From the picture you have posted in discord, Heidi most definitely gives off the crazy yandere vibes. So her killing Hedwig because the current king wanted to betroth them would most likely happen. Heidi would also probably kill the rest of the family too, "just in case."

As much as killing Sirzechs would be therapeutic, Riser wants to cause chaos, not a full-blown invasion, and bring about other pantheons ganging up on the devils. Falbium is a good choice to rise up in position, and he could probably do some much-needed military reforms.

It is better that the assassination attempt happened now so that he can prepare for future attempts. Maybe he can find a way to put some steel plates on his chest and back under his uniform?

I like it so far. But why choose Kuisha as a wife? Unless you plan to do the 'canon RIas' shenanigans and do a rating game to get out of the marriage?

John Wick> Cyberpunk> Others. Just to get more jump points and get his factory updated even more before he starts to tangle with more esoteric powers.

I can't recall any HS DxD fics were Rias is just left to fend for herself. Someone always saves her, and it would be nice for a change of pace.

And here is me foreshadowing that the MC will save Rias, and she will fall in love with him and be in his harem going forward. Can you just not do that?

I think I like it because it ISN'T focused on Konoha or the Naruto timeline. IIRC, Uzushio was destroyed around the second shinobi war, if the MC can learn sealing arts, could probably get some goodies from them, or he could defect to Uzu and help save them. Lots of options going forward, will the MC play the Paragon path or Renegade?