Grimace1118

Harry Potter and the Kleptomaniac... Enough said .....................................................................................................

A lot of potential but needs a rewrite, people with english as a first language will struggle. .................................................

bro love this story but please get an editor, "ontology sect"? really? you've used the correct name before so why does it fluctuate between random names? not the first time I have noticed this

moar

I've dropped it for now. Let me know if this gets edited. It isn't terrible, but there is a lot of strange wording in many places.

Good idea, poor execution. The use of ai makes the characters seem dead and robotic, if the characters had more life to them then this would be an excellent story.

Is this dropped?

I mean sort of but still seems like he is baby raging at them for reasons they can't control

For the sake of my own sanity I am just going to assume they had a conversation about this "off-screen"

tftc