Evilcommandereject

Run Forest, run.!

Better late than never, don't you think so, Buddy.....!!!

You almost got me....Dude but I admit your intro is funny. I will see a couple of chapters to see all the fuss is about... : ]

Time to make some Points......Sonnnnnn

Let the Hunger Games Begin.

Yes next time use your head ..... Son.[img=thinking]

No shit Sarlock ...!!!

I almost cry , almost... : ]

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Starting simple the story , most of the time when I m reading in the first chapter I always get a feeling that interest me the way you express to your readers let them intrigue or suspend is to get them hooked then on the next ones explaining in detail if you want, I’m not telling you who to do what you do I just explained how to get your readers to get hooked .