Aaron313

Also it wasn't that this( having multiple life experiences in cultivation world) is a bad idea necessarily, but stuff like this should only happen when mc reaches divine/god levels of cultivation realms not while he's still mortal after all how the hell does a mere guard captain of a branch family obtain a formation that can do something like that? shouldn't be possible at the mortal level and if he obtained it by luck why share it? he could just use it for himself it's a god tier formation that even blocked the damn system of the story you created.

If you say so, just be careful of the inception within the inception within the inception... you get where I'm going with this right? it'll make the main story irrelevant

Author at this point I think you're lost in your own sauce

keep your head up and fight for your happiness life is hard for All of us but the key to surviving and keeping moving forward is thinking of the people who care about you and growing as a person for them..stay strong 💪 brother

it's night time in a stealth mission owl is perfect

hmm hero finally confronted the main heroine about being a lying slut good, but by him only bringing up Ella does that mean he's given up Dutches and elf princess? I mean the elf I understand she got a whole black spade tattoo from another man along with both wholes penetrated and refused to let hero hit until marriage even though her virginity is already gone so there's literally no point in waiting anymore...so yeah but what about the other's?

yoo

no you definitely strong enough to punch him in the face he's weaker than you remember?

this is the only weak point of your story that bothers me the only thing you've made known in the story so far about Leon's skill is that it brings great pleasure too the recipient and increases their strength that's it,no brainwashing, growth of the user,or any kind of physical impairment of the recipient, so it just seems really fake and unrealistic that the heroes harem ever loved him when They instantly started following Leon's orders when they are physically stronger than him and he has no mental threat or control over them

you would think, even if the hero was a cuck he would draw the line at guy getting rough with his women guess he's a wimp too