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"unfortunate" Bro what. He legit sent kids with Hagrid to investigate a serial unicorn killer tf was he expecting them to find?

Confusing and misleading story that's somewhat boring to read. "I only remember my name" he says honestly while looking at an officer wearing a very old uniform. Also some parts if the story feel skipped and summarised.

The constant "Noir" made it unpleasant to read tbh. Thats not how you talk with someone you're close with and actually it's not how you talk, period.

faceplant= falling onto one owns face I think yo meant "facepalm"

I don't think this can be constituted as an interlude? I'm not an expert also I'm not gonna do research so take me word with grain a salt.

Ughhhh I can't take it anymore 16 chapters in and all I can say is the writing is average (for ff's on webnovel), the characters are one dimensional (kinda 'fanony') and the plot is boring, ----------Spoilers I guess--------- most of the things mc has done is visit places that Aang will visit in the future, there he impresses everyone and leaves behind a lil message that sounds something like "I was here first haha I'm so cool right?"

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