Darkone33

when did the flower shop girls join them? shouldn't it be the ax girls?

he howled.

that means.

More like it's a little odd to use the names where he's using them. then cross the fact that he's literally using famous characters, designs and names in very weird places and it's just odd.

these names bro. They kind of bad

for whatever reason, your novel is apparently under review. so new chapters cannot be bought by me. they won't tell me what it's under review for just that it is. Hope this gets back to you and hope you can resolve it so I can keep reading. I do like it.

so for whatever reason I can't purchase more chapters of this book. customer service says the book is under review. hopefully this gets to the author and he can ask some questions. cuz they won't tell me what it's under review for. just that I can't get any more chapters until it's done.

okay, when I type out something I immediately notice when I spelled it wrong though. and I at least reread it once just to make sure it's readable. it's kind of weird if literally that's one of the important parts of what you're doing and you don't do it

bro you keep going back and forth. between saying it's a bald old man and some chick. which is it?

zap? The hell did he break his leg with?