MrScroll

It is

I don't understand how this trash even had a chance to be translated. The quality is mid, I will admit that it has a good realses schedule but the development of the story is him being overpowered for no reason, like hes stronger then his own kage in the first chapter no development of character or world.

I say go for it as long as you plan on releasing all of your work eventually people will still read

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The story held promise but there had been very little character development. Story devopment was good apart for a few thing key being a complete copy of another story's SAO ark as well as the recent truth ark. I will keep reading but if it dose not change review will stay the same

The novel starts off promisingly, introducing us to a protagonist who embarks on an epic journey, battling legendary creatures and ending up in Kanto, right by Professor Oak’s house. This premise, while not entirely original, had the potential to be engaging and exciting. However, the narrative takes a disappointing turn when the protagonist inexplicably gains mastery in multiple disciplines without any apparent effort or training. The author seems to have fast-forwarded through what could have been a compelling journey of growth and learning, instead opting to bestow these skills upon the character as if by magic. The protagonist’s time in the world is stated to be a year, but the development of his skills does not align with this timeline. It would have been more believable and satisfying if the author had shown the character’s progression through hard work and dedication, rather than simply stating that he had become a master. In conclusion, while the novel had an intriguing premise and a potentially interesting character, the lack of believable character development and the rushed narrative left me feeling unsatisfied. I believe the author missed an opportunity to delve deeper into the protagonist’s journey towards mastery, which could have added much-needed depth and realism to the story. Yes I used an AI

Y’all cooked

I read this then read the next line saw your comment came back to like this xD

I haven’t read a fallen god for a while but this fic pretty much copy’s everything though it is a little different

i think you missed a chapter or 2?