KingRapha

Another work without titles in the chapters! Lame as fuck. We cant judge if this work is good or bad. Lazy translator? or forcing people to read it but no putting title cause if putting title people will know its 💩💩💩. Why bother upload it if its ibconplete put titles in the chapter and if i see a patreon after many chapter im gonna lose my mind lol

nah ur good im just frustrated by the chinese style milking stuff its not ur fault thou im just ranting

godamn u too many explanations man half of the chapter u already explained it last chapter. Im getting bored too much nonsense who cared about the info stuff u can explain it litlle by lille in the future not full blown explain everything is getting boring like like last chapter only the last line is the original all info dump sigh cant read this work easily man its gets boring easily go to atory line already too much milking hate author like this boring 😑😑😑

then fix it Its still 3rd seat. U can edit anytime author

Last chapter is talk no justsu then this chapter half of it is talk no jutsu insult stuff so cringe and childish lame and hes already milking this stupid plot already such a grabage writer lol

Its good at start until the bell stuff the author milk the shit out of it without a proper exciting thing happening even after it sasakue atill doesnt care prideful no change at all wated to much chapters for a fucking useless plot the original is better. I can imagine the halu plot will be 20 chapters then the MC will not do anything just flirt then sasakue will evrything just make this SASUKE fanfic the mc its just background the work of the mc pf that bell part to make sasake understand teamwork and stuff but the mc and that part become NPC and he will just it cause the MC lazy so stupid. Fuck this Bland MC no quality boring all he do is flirt and stuff why every plot like this always has a lazy indiffetent MC like people really like this shit goddamn man. FUCK U author

People read this BS hes not even strong enough to fight the his first enemies and hes already targeting another group to target him wtf is this stupid jumbled storyline he can barely train and now ur nerfing jim to much by forcing a plot. he should have 100℅ already but the forced plot ibsted of tarining his doing sonething else hes not even strong yet its so dumb and the the backgroud its sl stupid its like earth is in a city can he go to another place or go to the woods worhout cctv or something to track him lile why are the MC here are so dumb magneto and prof X are saying we nedd to help him but not doing anything the story is so full of wholes man the author dumb and everyone is racist typical chinese shit instead of getting stro ger he will get a forced plot fights to atop being OP foced nerf he has the most OP pwer to upgrade go the the woods train for a month or a year comeback for the revenge but here hes always running getti g spined so dumb i dont even know why people bother read this one im just wasting my time i though it was good at first the premise is promising but author is 12 dumb and stupid mixing everything the most fucking annoying hes not killing the people he neets to kill he only killing the unkown ones dumb and stupid fuck so annoyinf wasted my time reading yhis garbage worm

talk no jutsu bullshit. Useless chapter all for face slapped boring and childish

See half of rhe chapter is ibfo dumb about shadow clone too much explation hahahaha

1 chapter for a shadow clone plus face slapped mode typical chinese then next chapter explaining every detail about shadow clone the milking fest is to much chinese man its so dumb its not xianxia that every move need a chapter 😂😂😂