閱讀
1826
閱讀作品
Yup. It was a ASOIAF/GOT fanfic now i dont know anymore, what a waste of potential and my time too, i read 50 chapters to se this s&/t...
goes to mass effect not marvel lol sorry typo
crysis effect, a crossover , character from crysis goes to marvel, decent stuff. nothing greeaat but decent. goggle it, it has 2 parts in fanfiction . com
number one fanfic in this website* i think i deleted that part, or its some sort o bug.
3 stars overall score, why? because author decide to have 3 chapters with 3 different personality for the mc. He says that he will get revenge blah blah blah but its just a clear edgelord type of fanfic. Also, this is cliche galore, honestly, its a bit better than other webnovels here but not that much. Writing quality 4 stars- why? because its decent compared to other webnovels here, author leaves comments in chapters that are almost the same size as the whole chapter but yeah, oh and pls plsplsplspls send powerstones to the guy , wtf man are you thanos or what?~ updates-5 stars i dont think that he misses a update since he has written chapters in advance and at this point i dont care... Story- Have you ever ever ever in your entire writing carreer the phrase SHOW DON´T TELL ? World Background- cliche , and not tastefully done cliche like you expect someone who wrote a fanfic with almost 200 chapter about the same freaking world. Honestly dissapointed and more dissapointed since this is freaking number one fanfic in here, like wtf?
Im just trying to help you out but you really need to renake this chapter if you want more viewers, i think this is the 3 time i clicked on your fanfic just to stop reading here because of this kindergarten dialogue format. Its just my opinion take it how you will.
From what movie ?
No romance till chap 40 but i think it will have romance, the way the plot goes... :D BTW its a very good fanfic, not very good in first chapters but it gets better, for those who are hesitating.
Exactly, writing quality is pretty good the rest is just a mess im at chapter 73 and i regret i wasted my time. The start was so good, with his mentality and all of that, it just transforms into a harem seeking protagonist... I was expecting more with that start, totally disappointing.
Thanks i was actually just about to click read button but not now, good day to you.