Ayer52

Definitely, I would give stones for bonus chapters

This chapter killed it for me. It was already established that the simulator wouldn’t affect real life and yet now a character had a dream where they remember the life that happened in the simulation.

Please don’t follow canon and have Thalia end up as a tree. With Lucian there, he should be able to prevent anything bad like that from happening.

I hope Tiamat doesn’t end up with Bahamut. I’m not a fan of when the MC is being manipulated, so I want him to reject Tiamat completely.

I get that you are introducing new characters and showing that despite his power increase he is still weak, but be careful of having characters show up too much that completely overpower your MC. It can get annoying if the MC is looked down on too much and he can’t do anything about it yet. Other than that I’m enjoying the story and the growth he Cao Cao is showing.

Is it just me or is the story now moving at a snails pace? Each chapter lately has been mostly filled with inner dialogue or over explanations that don’t move the story forward.

I feel the same way, the story has been slowing down a great deal. Then again I’m not a fan of story arcs where the MC hides his identity so maybe it’s just me.

Even though it was part of his plans, they should fuck over Frozen Cloud. I never liked them in the original story

I really enjoyed this chapter, I like that you showed the perspective of Koujou and his family. I hope you continue showing his perspective as they finally arrive in the Land of Grass and how they feel about finding hope for their family.

I’ve been enjoying the story so far but the development with Fleur seems pretty rushed to me. Though I may have a bias because I’m not a fan of Fleur. Other than that, it’s an entertaining story