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Thanks so much man! Other than this one problem, I've been enjoying this read quite a lot. Keep it up

Like, do you have any clue how many songs there are out there called Riptide? Quite a few... and Runaway? Even more. Still don't know which songs those are btw

I thought it was Lucas Graham's mama said. Instead it's High Hopes by panic at the disco? It's confusing when you don't let us know which songs you mean exactly. Other authors who made this kind of fanfic usually put the original title and artist somewhere in brackets so the readers know precisely what's being played. And if you're going to arbitrarily shuffle song titles and lyrics like this I strongly recommend you start doing the same. Really could have just called it High Hopes and still dedicate the song to his mom.

Someone who likes harem stories won't necessarily drop a story just because it doesn't have a harem, whereas someone who hates harem stories will most likely drop it if there is a harem. It's easier to handle not getting something you want than it is to handle having something you hate being shoved down your throat.

Don't worry about it. It actually lets me know there's still interest.

What job would that be?

Nonsense! There's no way a Snorlax passes up on food

Against the Phoenix Force yes, but that's just because that's its weakness. It's like fighting Superman with fists that emit Kryptonite radiation. Useful against a Kryptonian, sure. But against anything else? Useless. And I know Chi has other properties, it strengthens the user etc. I get it, but in the grand scheme of the Marvel multiverse, unless you're going up against the phoenix, I'd pick almost anything else over Chi.

Jesus Christ! He's fighting harder AGAINST potential rewards than he's fighting FOR his own life.