
Just guy that love to read system and gamer fics (any fics just think gamer one s are best 😂)
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And clickbaiting Chapter names which are not even true....
Bro translation quality is slipping into Chinese territory please can you go back as it was in the beginning its starting to get cringe just reading some paragraphs.
Good work so far is what i would say if you actually focused on your mc but sorry to say but if i wanted to see what happened in original i would watch the anime... i was here for mc not Issei if he was the mc then ok but this completely killed the mood to continue even if its well enough written sorry.
Story is well made so far just hoping the author won't stop out of nowhere.
I guess when i hear sinfull i imagine something that evokes sin in others and I don't know about you but in women, bigger the "visuals" the easier it is for brain to turn into "monkey sees, monkey wants" mode so yeah in summary guys are visual creatures more often than not and as such bigger more often than not means "better" for majority.
That feeling when decently written/translated fanfic starts turning Chinese(makes your brain try to understand WTF is happening)
E.N.D Etherious Natsu Dragneel prety much steam rolls riser and has good power level not so OP you kill everything but also not so weak about maou level around serafal of course that is peak not start up (not post acnologia natsu alternative one who has devil and dragon slaying magic) powers:fire devil and dragon slaying magic,magic boost, pretty much fire imunity and empowerment,boost to devil bloodline and some dragon bloodand more if you are interested look up when natsu temporarily demonized and make it under control and you got him. Anyway now that am done with my ranting good fic so far hope you wont't ditch would be shame to be honest.
You my friend just achieved something that majority of translators or hell even authors can't seem to grasp.
To be villain you don't need to be pure evil just by standing on the opossite side of protagonist or "Child of destiny" makes you "villain"