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why was this not an extra additional chapter at the front of the book. instead of putting it as a main chapter and causing us to waste our coins?

I'd give a better review if half the chapters weren't filled with anti theft paragraphs blocking us from reading the story. and it's clear that Webnovel didn't even bother checking this.

Appologies, i think it was more how the ending had him killing Joseph, unless your showing what that night blade is mentally showing to get his guard to drop and reveal the secret. if so I had to think on this, it wasn't very clear. maybe add a time juxtaposition at the start of the next chapter?

stalled updates?

this chapter ending does not match the next chapter

a third of this chapter is repeated text

this should be swapped with chapter 47

Lucas = Gary

starting at chapter 360 the editing stops. it basically turns into what I can best describe as straight MTL copy pasta.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola