LeafLetters

you mean redeeming quality?

realistic -> materialistic

that's canon in the Bakiverse. There was one elite fighter who wanted to take revenge on Yuujiro Hanma and so he trained himself up to be able to deliver super human slaps that would cause agony to even the most well trained, freak of nature body in existence. It was so dumb..

Buried treasYaaarr

The sin of sloth lies in not taking action when it your duty requires you to. It occurs when you choose, either from fear or laziness, to ignore something so you don't have to deal with the consequences of stepping up to take action. The choice made to avoid unpleasantness means you betray your integrity.

bady swap jutsu, no?

relocate not reallocate

he's raging and just been stabbed so clearly he should be in the right headspace to give a philosophical lecture. .

Quinn is basically acting like a sad reflection of the Manipulative Dumbledore you see in a lot of fanfiction. Except the explanation of why the changes to the original HP story make sense don't hang together so it's all rather silly

The story would be vastly improved if you have the main character some character, and rather than giving him infinite potential in an unsightly information dump at the very beginning it would be much better if he had to go around collecting Plot Coupons to improve his powers.