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Honestly this had so much hope. Good writing quality, unique Weasley concept, wishes were weird it would be much better if the MC didn't show emotion to infantile girls

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just p w/o p... Dont even bother searching for plot is somewhat readable surprisingly... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ......................................

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Have you heard of this phrase- "Lost in translation?" Same thing here... English as it stands is a simpler language and some things that you can explain in one language may not even be a word in English. this is why you have hundreds of adapted words every day [img=recommend]

hmm better person to say this would be Max but he doesnt fit this situation, so maybe change it to something else? It is Gwens first time seeing aliens you know-

Proper english Good update speed Meh, reading history books is what this novel is all about tbh, just add a little marvel twist. It has been a 100 chapters and no sign of the history book ending, just like in schools. Character design is probably the worst. MC has no mind of his own. He pretends to 'think' and supress himself, so he can surprise the entity that gave him power. Cliche as cliches can be. Dude, use logic. If an entity gave you power, powerful enough that can change the whole plot of marvel, then he can surely read your puny mind. There is some modicum of a planned plot. But this plot begins and ends in the mini arcs of the little history lessons the author gives us. The is nothing connecting the previous place to the new one they travel to. World background is based on stories all around the world. Western world. What about the east? I don't know. Why don't you ask the aliens why they only land in America? Maybe because its freedom is weird. Keep chanting "Plot Armour". Maybe one day it gets more interesting.

dude where do you think the WW2 pictures came from?

A fun concept. Keep up the good work. Although this book is not for me, I highly encourage readers to try a few chapters first. . . . . . . . .

Many reasons not too read. Do you want to know? Then read the story... All hopes dashed... mvjfvjgtcccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc