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Drowning 10 years? That’s unbelievable strength and cruelty
Sounds like the start of a new novel
Problem is the writing. The story and translation are okay okay, but the writing shows the author is inexperienced. They are weaving in exposition in dialogue in such a way that makes it hard to believe someone just said that.
So detailed. What poor writing. No one talks like that.
Why is there Han vs. non-Han in this?
Why am I not surprised? Next, they are breaking off an engagement
That Kuo brat probably didn’t learn his lesson!