crownklown

I think the best smut I've ever read. Only hindrance is lack of access to the content otherwise Id have already binged it all. Love hate how slow it is but the anticipation is destroying me!

perfectly done... at least the best ive ever seen.

I have been really enjoying this story & constantly surprised by how well thought out everything turns out to be as well how in depth things are without losing some of the nuances of day to day life. Keep up the great work it's been such a pleasure!

I'm not sure for others but I hate when the Author sends MC back unsatisfyingly. It's not before his wife died, it's not before the tower, It's randomly a few years in. Author is probably trying to avoid doing adult scenes but if that is the case just have the MC come back but fail to save his wife and that show's that he wont be all powerful along with being grief stricken on losing his wife twice. Being sent a few years in is probably my personal peave so I won't go into that. But overall I don't think this book is for me best of luck!

Loving the book so far, I generally like info dumps especially if they are relevant throughout but our author here goes kinda crazy with them haha. Slightly annoyed with error 404 but excited to see what author does with it. My only two complains I'm loving this book and a great binge.

Here are issues I have with the story got to ch75. The intro before birth was long but interesting but no payoff(so far) which is annoying. The mc is quite dumb he has a reason for hating adultery(cheating) which is fine but there is no consistency in his actions 1 sec its ok next sec wtf how dare you(parents). I hate talkative systems, I especially hate systems that withold information for no particular reason. His secret outing to discover the world was so bad. It doesnt make sense to go from completely isolated in a modern tech world to getting yeeted into school with no explantion. His ignorance about the world doesnt make sense as he should have recieved the same info every other kid has. No reason is given for his type of upringing author should have picked transmigration if he wanted an ignorant mc that has different morals from the unknown worlds morals. Oh shit there are gangs, yeah were a bunch of outcast & I'm their leader wanna join, I'm in. Power system was explained but I just skimmed it. I like the spice scenes & how he gets stronger. I would have loved for him to get real repercussions for treating his info gathering outing so lackadaisicaly which wouldnhave been a great chance to fix his character and head back to the intro world before birth. idk just my two cents oh the first fucking girl isnt an elf but a werewolf!?

I could not disagree more.

I'm more excited writing this review than I was finally finishing this story. So tldr this whole story is just take a loss grind rinse and repeat until big payoff & reveal at the end. At the 400-500ch mark I considered dropping it because there was 0 character development and every character you meet up until that point was irrelevant and not a single other person was developed. At least half this book is the level up/learned line to the point of nausea. MC is like Naruto so get ready for talk no jutsu. His "holy sword is sealed" because author doesn't want to write any romance and covers the gaping plot whole in half a paragraph at the end. The world rules you get to eventually learn about are so unsatisfying and make no god damn sense. The quality of the writing start's to drop but the story quality starts to rise near the end which was funny. All in all extremely frustrating like final season of GOT without all the good shit before it. Maybe this will be great for other people but the MC is severely lacking personality, character traits, flaws and growth to carry this type of story.

Hey im struggling to finish this here, I'm on ch369 and my man just keep taking L's after L's there are no side character's, holy sword stays broke, and we have no clue the status of other characters, and my boi is now in hell with no items and the possibility time has been super forwarded. I feel like I have nothing to look forward too in this arc.

Was surprising how great a web novel can actually be. Has everything i could possible ask for with a realistic mc that doesnt make thoughtless decision's.