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This seems a bit silly. The MC really thinks he's in control on a battlefield. Not exposing the sharingan in a battle filled with literal assassins seems like the the height of stupidity.
It's kind of annoying. He spends most of every chapter in his own head constantly tuning out everything around him. As professor oak would say, there's a time and place for everything, but not now. Could be good if he just monologues to himself every now and then, but it's never ending.
Just binged the whole fic. I enjoyed it quite a lot. Is there an upload schedule for this somewhere?
Novel doesn't really appeal at all. Lots of shit that feels forced. The blue splotches from the drink that make the doctor think he's been abused, despite not having been. The fact that he's diagnosed as quirkless then surprise, hes not. It's just one of those low quality fics. For what it's worth, the writing quality is at least decent.
Let me start by mentioning that I am biased against this type of character. I think everything Ein writes is in the top percent of fanfiction, but it feels like once you've read one MC of his you've kind of read them all. This is another story of his where I genuinely think that it might be better without all the female interaction because it's honestly kind of grating. I have a lot to say about the MC's but there's far more to his stories than that so I'll drop it. The premise is quite good. A barebones system kind of deal, and frankly I am biased in FAVOR of these types. Story seems a little slow but that's pretty standard for Ein. The quality makes up for it. This MC isn't a retard though. He's willing to offer trust like an actual person to the people who can and will help him, instead of being a brooding edgelord so that's good. Anyway, my only real problem is with the MC, and I'm heavily biased against characters like his. Give it a shot instead of letting my low rating dissuade you from reading. If you don't agree with what I've said, reply to my review so others can see both sides of things.
The beginning is a cliche I've seen a hundred times at least. The power of a druid is something I'd actually be interested in seeing. The grammar is atrocious and cripples the story. I couldn't even really focus past the grammar. I saw another review suggest writing in your native language and machine translating it. I would suggest you try this as well.
That sequence of events felt too contrived. It's one thing if you decide to asspull a single meeting like with Martina, but that just made this one seem boring and repetitive.
It's not a good story. The premise is good but the plot is not. The main character is absolutely awful. He has so many problems and so many conflicting character traits it's quite obvious the author has no idea what he wants with the MC. I made it to chapter 26. The fact he can't fathom being attacked by an organization while actively aiding their enemies is ridiculous. He then strong arms the org he was aiding into helping him get revenge, or the "Deal is off." Despite the fact that there is a Geas and he would have to suffer a severe penalty that he doesn't have the resources to give. As you can probably tell, this incident really bothered me, but its simply the final straw and a series of decisions and plot holes that make absolutely no sense.
I genuinely despise when MC's tell everyone they are reincarnated. It just instantly makes me frustrated. I suspect it's because if this REALLY happened, he would get smited. Yasaka would not just say "okay". There would be so much there, and it just gets reduced to that. That's the reason I really hate when MC's do this. They give away their biggest secret and it just gets glossed over with no ramifications.
Story is okay. The chapters are so short it's silly. One single scene is the equivalent of a whole chapter, so take that in mind when you read it.