Faveryy

This started out fantastic. Really great premise and a fairly intriguing main character. But, it seems I hit the wall that many others have been hitting in that it's just a slog to read throughThere truly is a point where too much of a good thing just ruins the rest of it, and of course by this I mean the romance. I can appreciate a good slow burn, but when damn near every chapter, or at least what seems that way, is filled with cheesy smut and corny lines of love, the whole thing gets dull real quickI'll definitely be checking out more works! In terms of grammar and initial ideas, as well as communication with the reading audience, I was particularly impressed, however as of right now, this one ain't it

I'm only a fraction of the way into this but I'm hooked hardcore Genuinely a very unique idea, and an interesting take on it as well. It being a prequel of sorts to Swtor leaves a whole lot of paths open, and it has my thoughts on overdrive trying to figure out what might come next This may update once I'm caught up with the remainder of what's up now, but so far, definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes

It's been a while since I've dug out a star wars fanfic as good as this one is. I'm loving the crew's chemistry and the direction the story itself is taking. Quality is great overall. My only qualm is the update speed, but as someone who used to write regularly, I get the pain of trying to keep a regular schedule with this sort of stuff I'm enjoying this very much. Keep it up!

I don't exactly get to say this very often, especially on the fanfiction side of this site. This piece is well written, well thought out, and most importantly, seems to be well taken care of This is definitely something to keep an eye out for, at the very least. If nothing else, the first 190 chapters hooked me in quite deeply, so perhaps it will do the same to you