TheGrandMemerofQI

Can’t wait for more chapters 😁

I’ve been reading your works since 2022 and I’m sad to see it has come to this. You definitely deserve to be paid more for the work you do. Make sure to take care and look after yourself. I hope your situation improves. I’m also quite curious what full time job you’ll be getting.

Interesting story but the translation is holding it back.

I think this is a unique and great way to build up towards the end and I’m anticipating the ending you come up with. I’m also looking forward to the next book you write.

You know what you’re doing with this story and I’m reading because of your interesting twists and turns you take, that are unique and different. Anyone commenting about dropping is a baby and should really reflect on themselves as people. Congrats on the amazing work you do.

I was shocked how no reviews point out how bad the lack of actual editing is in the initial chapters. There is little to no explanation of what is happening, just a massive info dump and random character names thrown at you without any connection fostered between the reader and the story. Hardly any world-building leads to large portions of chapters feeling tedious and a time waste to read. Bad sentence flow, poor wording and terrible jokes made me drop this. The overall premise of the novel is interesting. However poorly executed and very generic regarding naming.