Althen

A child with the mentality of an adult. He trains a lot but does not use any of his possible “cheats”. He does not try to talk with the fox (you mentioned he is scared it is trying to control him, not enough reason if he wants to develop as a tailed beast recipient), does not use the shadow clone jutsu he knows (fear on being caught, he can hide it in his house and train it), etc… If it’s about time or money, he could invent food, write a famous book, music, etc…

THE translation is going from acceptable to I can’t even understand what they are saying…

Characters do not behave with a bit of logical sense behind the decisions. Out of character. He gets too strong too fast. …………………………………………………..

It’s a copy of “The Spider” fanfic, word by word. Lying about it being the next book. Don’t pass this as original like you indicated……………………

Bad grammar, characters actions and more specifically how they act or behave is nonsense or out of character, story development is decent at most, …

Awful cringe chapter

I would like to keep with the main characters with kingdom developement :)

The stats part does not make that much sense. There should be a difference. 15 levels x2 stats are 30 more strength.

You mention he didn’t want to kill the king because he forgets it’s a game all the time… so this time he want to kill all and changes his view in les than 24h? 2 chapters???

If the spirit of the kingdom appeared when praying to save an elf in the kingdom, the king, why aren’t the concubines given the same option?