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Aceees2 months ago發表unlucky probably
- Aceees2 months ago發表
i forgot Rose who was that ?
- Aceees3 months ago發表
he practiced bunts as well right so how come he became novice without system..
- Aceees4 months ago發表
story is quite good but I gave 1 to story development so overall 4.2 rate is due to the uncanny ability of author to bullshit 🤣 i have never seen any author stretch 1 sentences to a whole chapter.. literally a whole chapter will finish analysing how 1 sentences can be seen from different perspectives 😂😂
- Aceees5 months ago發表
This is literally like the starting of the Lord of mysteries world.. At least the the first 273 chapters feels like it.. Its a fun read if you like LOM you will enjoy this as well..
- Aceees6 months ago發表
The cost of materials is 1 so everytime he make mistakes its deducted from his deposit. hence he made 2 mistake his deposit went down to 8, he completed 8 so got paid 8 total 16.. 10 kept as deposit and 6 he got again...
- Aceees6 months ago回復 lvl30dragon
The cost of materials is 1 so everytime he make mistakes its deducted from his deposit. hence he made 2 mistake his deposit went down to 8, he completed 8 so got paid 8 total 16.. 10 kept as deposit and 6 he got again...
- Aceees6 months ago發表
Good plot.. have some potential but need more chapters