Novel_Nerd

Read 522 chapters in 2-3 days. Says wonders about how good this novel is. And even better yet I rarely skimmed the chapters, they were so engaging that I read most of them word for word. Anyway enough positive reviews there’s loads of other reviews that do it better, time for probably the only criticism I have. - Harem - Sorely lacking in side male characters. The author does an amazing job with all the mc’s female characters. Each of them leaving a memorable impression and nice back story even some mystery. But fuck me this novel could do with a bit of male bonding/ brotherhood aspect. Don’t get me wrong who doesn’t like a bit of harem here and there as long as it’s not over the top and the women actually have substance. But there has yet to be a male character be it in the real world or cultivation world that the mc actually talks to that would be with him in the long run. They are either enemies, fellow cultivators, his dreams or extras all of these last for a couple of chapters or an arc. Yes I get that’s how a harem works and this is just my preference but another male friend for the mc would be a breath of fresh air. Maybe the mc has trouble making male friends due to his sheltered upbringing I dunno. If the author has read this or if any of my fellow readers are up to date I would be grateful for any clarification or if there will be any male friends for our mc. Overall if you aren’t afraid of harem this is probably one of the best novels out there. Comparable to works like “Release that witch”. Also yes mc is naive but give it at least till chapter 10. Anyway enjoy the read ✌🏼

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I also think they mean whale. Isn’t that like a Chinese term for people that spend a lot in game.

- Review as of 20 chapters in: This is a transmigration system novel in a cultivation world that is ruled by sects. Our mc Is transmigrated into a 14 year old boy called Kai, who is a slave with nothing to his name and gets a system. Now unlike most systems I dont find it to be too op or broken yet, Which personally I like. Makes the mc seem more vulnerable, relatable and allows for growth. What does his system do you may ask? Read it and find out. •Writing Quality• Author has the occasional grammatical errors, however as an avid reader I read very quickly and build an idea of what is going on in my head therefore Isn’t noticable for me. The way author lays out system status is very nice and easy to read. •Story development• Unlike most sect creation novels, mc doesn’t (or has yet to) produce anything out of thin air such as a sect building. This gives the novel a nicer, slower pace than other sect building novels. This seems like a novel where we will see the mc work his way up step by step and toil away to build his sect. I say this because the Author might have foreshadowed mc becoming an alchemist in order to secure funds to operate his sect. Furthermore, bare in mind mc is only 14 years old. I imagine most sect leaders are much older than this and therefore may be quite a while before we see any actual sect development. However there are already signs of the mc’s first disciples, which is a good start. •World background• Author does a good job of slowly introducing the background world and not info dumping everything all at once. It also helps that mc knows almost nothing as well so as he learns we learn with him. All in all this looks like a novel with a lot of potential and was something I enjoyed reading. I wish that there were more chapters, so thanks author looking forwad to see what happens next 👍🏼✨

Novel was so good 😭

Dayum thats Kinda sad 😢

Quick update this novel has been turned into a manga. Just goes to show how good this novel. One of the rare few I didnt drop after hundreds of chapters.

Yh thats basically what happened 😂👌🏼