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imagine the mc being attacked by a rain of animal shit by his enemies lol
People I recommend for the group: Luffy from One Piece, Naruto, he needs friends as a child, Silvana the elf from World Warcraft, Cyri from The Witcher, Super Boy the young version of Superman, he needs friends who can understand him being different; young Aragorn from Lord of the Rings, John in his youth he also needs friends, young Goku in his first adventure to have the dragon balls, Elsa Escalarte from Fairy Tail, Elsa from Frozem, Young Arthoria, as long as she lives, from Fate.
He has the following lineages: Nemurian, Asgardian, ice giant and Olympian? Is this correct or is something missing? giant, Olympian comes from Atreus right?
Good story, but I feel like there are times when it doesn't seem very real, like saying that hunger and poverty are humanity's problems, but not being able to solve them in a concrete way, but I understand that this would require details that could hinder the creative process.
Following the line of thought, if he improves metabolism, cells in general, could he become stronger than many mutants? After all, we have natural capabilities, even if not very strong, in various areas of the constitution and functions of the human body.
I have the impression that it would be interesting to make connections between this world and that of the witcher and warcraft and Diablo, all of these worlds have things that make travel between different dimensions plausible, not to mention that it would make the story more diverse, both in characters and creatures, and finally the general scenario is similar, fights with swords and magic.
Good story, and in the comics a world like this has already been shown, if I'm not mistaken, it's cool to see a story based on things outside of the UCM. Can mc receive bloodlines? If so, I recommend Aragorn's, it gives you longer life and a better physique, the MC could be considered an ancient human, there are also the characteristics of humans from One Piece, who through training and the right diet can have bodies capable of destroying mountains or the resistance to fight for several days in a row, the Senju and Uchika lineage, one to improve the body and the other the mind, along with some basic techniques and the Chakra refinement technique, the lineage of Harry Potter's wizards, all these things are from human beings, would increase the MC's potential, without ruining the story, as they require time to learn, control, and improve. There are things like the Ravenclaw lineage of night angel that gives almost immortality, or other human abilities, even the super soldier serum is to improve depending on the genetic potential, if the mc receives things only based on humans from various worlds he can still become very powerful and through scientific improvement or magical rituals, capable of fighting even entities in the future.
Leave Isey to Ryas, he is very problematic, unless the red dragon can be traded from him, like sending some power or items to make an exchange, he would be more useful to the mc as a teacher, not to mention that the armor is powerful and cool in addition to being able to absorb other weapons and powers, like he did with Escalon the sword and the white dragon's power orb. Harry Potter's magic is very metaphysical, the classes created are just to condition the mind, not to mention that it doesn't lack mana, it just depends on how strong the core becomes over time naturally or with the help of rituals, now the big advantage is that it requires will, feelings and determination, but there is no such thing as running out of mana, just the fatigue of the mental effort to maintain focus and other things, Mc's mental power gives him a great advantage, and it won't be like others in Marvel, depending on pider loans from beings from other dimensions.
But besides his different appearance, MC doesn't speak the Pakistani language, wouldn't it be better to say that he is a Chinese tourist? Even because China in history is an ally country?
Congratulations, translator, if more people did a good job like this we would have many more good works to read, free from poison, xenophobia, racism or excessive patriotism almost to the point of brainwashing or seeming like propaganda.