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please be more clear with your words or I will delete this comment. I'm not a mind reader

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I posted an auxiliary chapter about the system and more information I thought I should put in there. Please go take a look. Have a good one Jaden

a glutton is too powerful for them to fight against. Even when they know it's weakness. Remember, they haven't been awakened at this stage, so they are not strong enough. I'm a college student, so my time is filed with mid terms, hence my horrible updating. Spring break is the week after next so keep a look out for updates

Thanks for bringing up valid points. I will make an auxiliary chapter going further into depth as to what the system actually is. I was originally going to give little tidbits over time but you have made me realize I should probably explain it now. Once again I appreciate you commenting and I encourage you to comment when there is something u might not understand or are confused about. I am human after all so I am capable of making mistakes no matter how many notes I take

This was done on purpose to show that everything has not sunken into his brain just yet. His system does not have an active AI, so it will not give warnings unless his life is endangered or unless he asks questions. The only thing different about his system is that it's geared and designed to make him into a villain, nothing more and nothing less. Once again he is young and inexperienced. Thanks for reading and commenting. Let me know if you have anymore questions. All I ask is that you put yourself in his shoes for a moment. You have to read between the lines. Enjoy!

No, they didn't spar with each other. I decided to go a different route. At first, I wanted the whole family to watch them spar and bond but thought of another and more meaningful way. As you read, you will see what I am talking about.

Yeah, the reason is that I wanted to portray him as being so busy and not having adapted to everything. He was still learning and experimenting at this stage. He had a lot on his mind, and, like an actual person, he simply forgot. Sorta like we sometimes forget to check our emails. Thanks for commenting!

I feel like I need to remind my readers and give a heads up to my future readers. 1. I have a prolog in the Volume 0. YOU MUST READ IT! If you don't read it, then there is a high chance you will not understand anything. 2. My character does not become a villian in the beginning. It is a process that you will see so it will have a good pace. 3. I was inspired to write this based on two different sayings. 1.) Villians are not born, but they are made. 2.) The difference between a villian and a hero is how they react to pain. A hero takes the pain the world throws at them and chooses to never let others feel their pain. A villian takes that pain and turns it back onto the world tenfold. 4. The MC is 16. He lost everything and has to start over. I'm a realistic person at heart, so if you expect him to just adjust automatically, then Oh well. I love fantasy because there are no limits put on it and there is no true wrong/correct way to anything. 5. I take criticism, NOT personal opinions. 6. I ask everyone to have an open mind and trust the writing process. Thanks for reading this far. Have an amazing day😁

Ohhh. Ok, I think I understand what you mean. I'm taking a new approach. My story is the Era of a Villian. If you read along, you will see him gradually turn into the villain. He just doesn't become a villian over night. The goal is for everyone slowly see the evolution of him becoming a villian