...
閱讀
3645
閱讀作品
Gostei até agora, vamos ver como a história se desenvolve. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Me dê mais [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=update]
[img=recommend]
Estou esperando ansiosamente o próximo capítulo.
I liked the worldview presented so far, but I feel like the development of the world could be sped up a bit more and the character should be explored a bit more in their unique points to strengthen themselves and their Pokémon.
So far the story is going well, a good progression, and shows a fun point of view about the Pokémon world, I'm looking forward to seeing where this fanfic goes.
I find this story very interesting, but very repetitive in its vocabulary, it seems like it was written using artificial intelligence and did not go through any review process, in addition it lacks charisma and human touch in the writing.