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Are you writing a poem? So you cut each paragraph into a few lines? Maybe you don't even care, because this story will probably be abandoned soon. It's been this bad since the first review... 😄☻☻

Did you write shit or just steal other people's work and mtl it? All the paragraphs are irregular and truncated, as if they've just been copied from a translation machine. Did you never review it before posting it? Do you think your writing can be read by normal humans, unless it is abnormal? 🙄😆

bermimpilah... di siang hari.

Are you steals it from Masterofbob69's WN TLs site, thief? Shameless thief... At least you should referred it to original site, thief... Shameless thief...

Just f*** you to everyone help you, idiottttt...

great start

there's no annotation text now? removed by qi...

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Good work