Pit93

i read 20 chapters i don't know the cultivation system and i know nothing about the world exept it has at least 9 mountains where the sect is nothing more. translation is rather bad. example he finished foundation realm over night but it says he joined the sect over night as chapter title update stability: hard to rate because only trial read character design: don't really know anything about the charakters except mc has a login system where he get things every day and he doesn't want to do anything except sitting in his cave and cultivate. no backround info no real emotions no ambitions. every fight is someone tries to attack him and he attacks back 1 time with his fist, booooom enemy dead all in all its a bland story

8 days without chapters and that so soon after starting...have fun i'm out

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

i know its just a prolog and many things are skipped but i think that setting without skipping would give a rather good story in itself without relying on the akame ga kill world its really rare to see such a good prolog. i only have 1 other book that i know where the homeworld was interresting enough to think the mc could just stay in his home world

why doesn't he craft in his city with a pretty high world/aether energy?

your explanation of what happens in the last life was in one way good but on another note a really bad idea...a god who can change who a person is especially a main character just ruins the whole story because hey i don't like how he behaves i will just alter his personality. its just like killing the charakter repeatedly. i really like the story and will continue for now but if that god continues his meddling in others tough processes i will drop it. No problem with minor meddling but alter though processes just for fun is just not in my interrest it kills the interrest in charakters if they can just "klick" and be another person

the healer is so good...perfekt timing. The tank is missing 500 hp she heals 100 there is no timing needed just plane old skill spamming as soon as it is off cooldown. thats a no brainer and doesn't need skill

what's the problem he has those portal devices he can just evacuate people to other areas. it's not like he needs to house them just send them out und sell tents to the goverment to house them.