OyenKw

MC is Santa. He is keep giving stuff to stranger by using his own resources that he is get by risking his life. And then he is keep crying about needing more GM point for himself while keeping being Santa the next day he get his paycheck

the constant break in scenes is constantly disrupting my immersion in the novel. Imagine fighting Loki with Destroyer armor with half of the avenger in one chapter and then break happen in the middle of the chapter, a sudden flashback about a VR game he played a few chapters ago in the middle of the fight. and then the fight continues in the next chapter only for the author suddenly introducing the break again about the same vr game, and introducing Rouge as a player nicknamed "Ghost" or something. then in the next chapter i figured the novel will continue the fight, but NO! suddenly its another scene break, its osborn corp now, introducing a shareholder interupting a scientist or something. and then i figured the plot will continue to the fight with Loki, but NO! its another scene break after scene break in chapters 63 there's a few scenes break there. (to reminds you The MC is still Fighting a super Loki with half of the avengers+ Artoria) this is happen in chapter 62, word by word " While Allen faced Loki with Thor, Rebecca, and Wednesday stayed inside the virtual world, defeating other novice players. However, there was one more member of the team, a player dressed as Ghost, whose true identity wasn't that of an ordinary girl." the rest of the chapter is about her there are a few chapters dedicated to a scene break in the middle of a fight I really can't take this novel seriously. It makes me want to skip the whole chapter. if you want to introduce a scene break i suggest you do it after one arc is finished, or at least don't do it in the MIDDLE OF A FIGHT! sorry for the caps there, nothing personal to the author. i still enjoyed the novel in general, but this is constantly breaking My immersion makes me want to drop this novel.

This looks promising. ill be back when there is more chapter.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

thanks for the new chapter. it's hard to write something this good. we appreciate it. please ignore those unpleasant comments, they want to have 1 chapter per day ignoring the author's personal life, and still expecting the same quality through all the chapters.

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