CillaVonTier

so Gale is Sengoku, poqin is Garp and Isuka is Tsuru LMAO

thats Hina-jou

Hina-jou?

tftc author-san!

thres also the aron line

mate this is a chinese tl, u can see just by the overuse of moveset that foesnt even qualify as pokemon moves and all that

ai writen again...

correction, league and league with guns, both trash aswell

thsi shit is unnecessary, this aint a manga for u to add a title, just blend the story better

seriously this AI writing makes me wanna punch something, just adding a lot of nonsense emotions to a paragraph doesnt make it a good story, also the scene cuts just breaks immersion do try and blend it so the story flows and the dialogs could be improve